Poetry_Haiku

Haiku: Black spot on others

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10 comments

    1. Fingers in one hand
      One points, one bows, three point back
      Judgement by own hand
      –
      Hello Ian,
      Very true, what you say. Let’s not be so quick to judge.
      Peace,
      Eric

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  3. I got partially way-laid by this one as “black spot” immediately called to mind the ominous black spot of “Treasure Island”; the notice that a person’s days were numbered. On a third re-read I decide that your black spot has many similarities to Stevenson’s. Keep ’em coming Mr. Haiku King!

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    1. Most look, see the blip
      Biblical judgement awaits
      Evil’s games, fool’s gold
      –
      Hello Jane dear,
      Re-read your comment several times before I got what you meant – I think. Loved it because it made me dwell beyond what I intended with my original haiku. Invigorating!
      Thank you,
      Eric

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  4. Maybe we should retrain our minds to appreciate the unblemished area, then we do not focus on the black spot.

    Eric, initially I thought you forgot to post a picture because I saw a blank frame. When I read your haiku, then I realize the black spot. LOL. Hope this is a good sign that I am not always focusing on black spot.

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    1. Most see the black spot
      Some do not, it is their fault 🙂
      World needs these mistakes 🙂
      –
      Good one, Windy dear
      I’ve known you long enough and you’ve always seen the positives in life. Some are blessed. I was referring to myself – for having you as a friend 🙂
      Cheers!
      Eric

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