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    1. One’s fluttering heart
      Transports one to special realms
      Treasured memories
      –
      Hello Ina,
      These moments are so filled with magic – words cannot always do full justice.
      I hope all your wishes come true,
      Eric

    1. Show love all year round
      Love, not a retailer’s stunt
      Keep your love unique
      –
      Hello Jane,
      You spotted it right – this is a warm up for Valentine’s. And yes, Hallmark does come up with some marvellous words for all occasions.
      Thank you for your visit and comment,
      Eric

  1. I love the pink bubbles and that already makes me heady.

    I think it’s fate or destiny first, then come the eyes contact, follow by the fireworks.

    1. Fate or destiny
      Once love arrow is let loose
      It will find the heart
      –
      Dear Windy,
      I too subscribe to your thoughts. We’re players in a play already decided. The big question for me – who wrote the script? God? In one sense, yes. But it is more of a Chinese nested box, I reckon.
      Cheers,
      Eric
      P/s I love the bubbly too 🙂

  2. Yes the eye is a major contributor, but I read somewhere in the past there had been some scientific experiments which suggested smell was a major contributor so it could be chemistry in general. Obviously eye contact in a crowd is an important opener. Unfortunately, apart from chemistry, one may learn on getting to know the person they are incompatible as a lifetime partner. That’s when the head should click in to checkmate the hormones. 🙂

    1. Smell, touch, taste and more
      Many facets but eyes first
      Head and heart play games
      –
      Hello Ian,
      All you say is right. Perhaps that’s why sometimes Mr/Ms Right turns out to be Mr/Ms Very Wrong 🙂
      Cheers!
      Eric

  3. Dear Eric,

    I, too, remember such a rush of love, frissons of delight as I espied my future Beloved amongst the crowd, thrusting through the throng, ignoring bodies and limbs and cocktails in order to come close to my ethereal wonder, my soon-to-be wife.

    You captured it all in three lines. I admire how you condensed such a heady feeling in so few words, a testament to your writing prowess.

    Thank you for creating yet another alluring and compelling storyline. it spoke to my heart, and tonight will I turn in bed and give my love a lingering hug before slumber.

    Take care, my friend,
    Paul 🙂

    1. Eyes see, heart flutters
      In a crowd, loved one stands out
      A special bonding
      –
      Dear Paul,
      I totally share your sentiments. In busy malls, crowded cocktail rooms and anywhere with plenty of people – one tries to stand taller to catch sight of one’s loved one. And when the eyes connect – what a marvellous feeling that. Truly a private and special bond.
      Enjoy your time with your significant other 🙂
      God bless you and yours, my friend,
      Eric

    1. Three lines can say much
      Write life’s story in three lines
      Three stages of life
      –
      Good morning,

      I combined your two comments. LOL – sometimes like the mouth, the hand runs ahead 🙂

      Cheers!
      Eric

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