Be warned: Adult theme and some might find this gross…
Flash-fiction horror – 33 words or less.
Every year, hundreds of thousands are listed as “Missing”. Guys who prowl for one-night stands…beware the prowler.
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Eric! – Brilliant
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Thank you Mari 🙂
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So much for giving of one’s self.
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Yup! He sure filled her alright…
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And girls too! 😉
Yes, this is definitely gross – but hey, that’s part of the point.
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Demons and dames…ghouls and guys…fun and games…have fun, be game > for you’re the game!
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OMG eeew…but he is dead so…just imagine if someday all those missing guys (suckers for some night fun) will be found floating in gallons of urine in some jar or tank….
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Like dead snakes in spirit filled jars….puns intended 🙂
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😆 yes definitely like that
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Oh my Eric…I didn’t know you had it in you to write that. Gross! Yuck! Riveting! 🙂
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I did take a chance, Jeannie.
I did live a ‘colourful’ life before Lisa and my children came into my life. Now, I’m actually somewhat ‘prudish’.
One lives a ‘straight and upright life’ on a deserted island, no temptations. Another grows up in a cesspit and wallowed in it – then pulls himself out, bathes and tries the straight and upright life.
I wonder, who is truer, who is spiritually stronger…All of us bear scars of our journey and sometimes this surfaces in our sharing…and writing.
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I know what you mean. Most of us have a “before” and an “after” part of our life. If we’re honest we acknowledge it anyway. And the experiences of either/or enrich our writing. Nothing wrong with that. I think you are brave to do it and of course, it worked. LOL
I could write quite “bitchy” if I had the courage to because it’s one of those “been there, done that” scenarios. I’ve never committed murder, but I’ve been so mad I think I could have, given the right circumstances–enough I could write it and be convincing anyway.
We shouldn’t worry about offending “The Ladies Society” in some of what we write. It’s important to write in truth for what the story IS. Just my humble opinion. 🙂
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that is the beauty of redemption, although this poor fellow seems to have come up short.
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When writing this, I thought of a lot of things but ‘redemption’ certainly did not cross my mind.
I’ll have to dwell on this and return – see what you’ve done 🙂
Thank you, as I love such thought-provoking challenges. Peace, Eric
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Stephen King and Harold Robbins meet to re-tell the Biblical story of the “strange woman” in Proverbs 7, specifically the last 2 verses (Oops sorry to bend the rule a bit about quoting, Eric, but I figured out the connection on my own. 🙂 )
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LOL! Stephen King & Harold Robbins – yes, in my youth, I used to read the thrashy stuff put out by HR…
Good connection made Dee 🙂
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“adult theme” like you warned. Gross? Maybe suggestive too. A good warning though, guys can get swallowed up completely by the same thing that presents itself as fun. Sweet things kill! Some pleasures really do kill!
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This is based on a demon who does just that – takes the form of an allurimg woman and…
There is also a metaphorical slant to this about the dangers of fornication…
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Good one! You tried your hands on a new concept and it really is working just fine. I love the prudish ways. 🙂
Well, I always stick to them (for now)
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Talk about receiving full payment – didn’t she just took everything out of him plus he also ends up as a specimen. Oh dear, what a loser !!
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Yes, a loser in every sense…compared to this demon, the black widow is a pussycat…
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Wow Eric,
Not sure what to say yet. Every single guy on the hunt for cheap fun should read this. Cheap fun can be expensive.
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Well Selasie,
You’ve already said it. I’ll post one from the opposite view – women looking to pick up guys – in another week or so.
Peace, Eric
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That’s a good one Eric!
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Thanks Elliot 🙂
P/S Interestingly, I rescued your comment from my Spam folder. First time this happened with your comments – what is WP up to….
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I don’t think I’ve been commenting on that many blogs that I’ve become spam! I’ve read a few other users are having similar issues with WP at the moment.
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You’re right – I encounter the same problem. But once ‘approved’ my subsequent comments are okay. Oh, well…no real dramas
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That was fun and riveting
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Yes I believe it could be viewed as fun – Heh! Heh! Heh!
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Eric, this is way too funny for an engineer to have written! I will never see another Halloween plastic skeleton again without thinking of this flash fiction of yours here! And we gals surely do appreciate you taking our side in this one!
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It gives a whole new meaning to the “I’ll love to get under your skin” bit…. 🙂
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Sooooooo confused! Please, don’t explain it to me, I don’t think I want to know. 😛
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Heh! Heh! Heh!
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Life is all about gross things as well as the more delicate. It is only as we grow in maturity that we can learn to differentiate between the two.
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Very true Ian, very true…
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Remind me not to piss her off!!
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I love these layered puns 🙂
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😀
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It was great for me, how was it for you? – no answer. 🙂
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LOL! I’m going to love you to death 🙂
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