Ever notice how animals mark their territory – humans do the same, but they mark hearts… ************************* TelegramTweetWhatsAppShare on TumblrLike this:Like Loading... Related
“Your promises, writings on water”: I absolutely love the visuals that convey the deceit so vividly! Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry!
You are very welcome. Much appreciate your visit, Eric
Beautiful poem.. Beautiful use of words..
Thank you very much for your stopover and kind comment. Bless you, Eric
Very beautiful, I love this, it’s so very true
Glad it touched a chord or two. Cheers, Eric
Beautiful.. nothing could ever describe such feelings more than the way you phrased it ^_^
Glad you feel that way, Therese. All good wishes, Eric
Love this! Couldnt have said it better myself…
you are truly truly gifted! Keep rising and shining!
Thank you, Doose
Such encouragement keeps me blogging.
This touches me. I believe strongly in aligning actions with words. I love you is so easy to say (for some) but rarely matched with sincerity, true representation and consistency. Thank you Eric.
Glad to have you visit and comment.
It is terrible that “I love you” has become a casual toss on par with “Hi”.
“Integrity…you fade into the world of legends and myths, how I miss you” – Eric Alagan
Beautifully written and powerful.
Thank you and glad you found it so. Peace, Eric
Eric, real love does affect us like writing on our “walls” with a ball of fire! A GOOD thing, yes? I really enjoyed your handwriting on my writerly wall today as I read this post! Personally, I don’t believe a “cheatin’ heart” has enough fuel at any given point in time to burn a message on anyone — maybe scratch a scribble or two, huh?
Very well said ‘granbee’
You are right in that a ‘cheating heart’ is a like wisp of stale smoke – stinks a little but never makes a permanent mark.
Thank you for your sharing, always love it,
Yes, all stages of love throws up strong emotions.
This is my first visit but definitely not my last! Beautiful… thanks for sharing!
You are very welcome. Thank you for stopping by and hope to see you often. Cheers, Eric
Great post……words and actions may mark our hearts, but love stays in the pockets…love to you and yours Eric x
Like this take about love in the pockets.
Luv and hugz,
The line about a tree reminds me of a line in a song “Who told you that its alright to love me? Certainly not me.
Thank you for stopping over. Cheers, Eric
Mankind isn’t often kind!
Well written as usual Eric.
Thank you for the compliment, I appreciate this.
Markings give directions for better or for worse – a lesson in our journey of life. Use the markings to reach a higher path and that would have served its purpose.
Hmmm…something to mull over.
Thanks, Eric 🙂
Some markers change colors after their ink fades. Like tattoos that have been in the sun in extreme rays of light, they change and transform through time. Always appearing, just a different hue. Like jaguars on the hunt, some words bite like an animal and need to be refined. Whitearrows find wounded hearts…their marks leave trails of light.
Thank you for your visit and comment.
That is sweet of you. Thanks, 🙂
beautiful. the words echo Eric! the biggest traffic in our lives super highway – heart markers! nicely worded.
You do come up with nuggets…”our lives super highway – heart markers”
People do mark hearts. What we say and do can have enormous impact. I would hope that if anyone leaves a mark on your heart, that mark would be the indelible message of God’s love for you…and that you would make it welcome and let it be.
Be blessed. — Frank
You are very right. There are marks…and there are marks.
you are excellent with words to convey your thoughts, Eric. thanks for that.
Thank you and you are very welcome. Peace, Eric