Vampyre – Part Two of Four
Remember that young lady on a business trip and how she met that dark riveting man —
After 9/11, they tightened hotel security.
They watch the doors but who watches the windows?
Recall their first encounter > Not A One Night Stand
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Hope you enjoyed this 33 word flash fiction
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Ah, this is the one I missed. Nicely done.
Working backwards is sometimes a problem, glad to be catching up finally.
Hello Val,
Thank you for back tracking – appreciate this. Catch the final part on Tuesday 25th and then decide whether it is a dream come true or a nightmare this young lady has to live with
Cheers,
Eric
Hmmm…very enticing, indeed, Eric, when will part three appear? 🙂
Hello Lauren,
Later this morning – in a couple of hours 🙂
Cheers,
Eric
I read that old vampires fly, the young ones only levitate–is she in for a surprise when an old dude shows up at her 24th-floor window?
Vampires can change into any so-called ‘evil’ creature of the night – they can fly when they take the form of bats. They also have the ability to flow like the fog through key holes, etc.
Vampires look old when deprived of fresh blood – but otherwise, they look their physical best.
As far as all these ‘modern’ vampires on shows go – well, their authors are letting their imagination run wild – must be the cheap whiskey chased with ice.
Gotta try this!,
Go for it 🙂
Wonder how many more windows he knocks on… curious..
Hey, that’s a good one, Jasey dearest
Vampires are not known to be monogamists – recall, old Drakul had three wives – that makes – Knock! Knock! Knock!
wow hot stuff there Eric, you really set a steamy scene with such few words! you really make micro fiction look so easy.
Awwgh! That’s so sweet and thank you.
All good wishes,
Eric
Let’s hope she had her portable crossbow on the bedside table. LOL
LOL – good one. And let’s hope it is not made in China
A lot can happen in a few days!!
Very true. When she returns – if she returns – her boss will regret that spark of generosity
Live and learn!
what a wonderful second part to the story!
Thank you Willow dear – appreciate the kind words.
very clever I love it
Thank you, Barb – I know you refer to my post and not the woman in the story.
Peace,
Eric
Hmm, In my mind that is one very foolish girl heading for disaster. Are vampires fertile? The possibilities for chapters three and four are endless – guess I’ll have to wait alongside her!
Many foolish people out there – giving in to imaginary and fleeting pleasures, Jane.
Vampires are not fertile – one does not need to be when life is (for them) everlasting.
I’m waiting alongside her with me little kit of holy water, spike & mallet and a crucifix – Damn! Made in China!
Hmm, a little bit of naughty, I guess. Eric, you blow my mind with enticing possibilities.
Oh, Uzo – was that a naughty pun 🙂
😀 Blame it on the writing 😀
Excellent piece of flash fiction Eric, thanks for sharing it.
You’re very welcome, Dom. Always nice to see you here.
Cheers,
Eric
I’m suitably intrigued 🙂
Thank you, Celestine – the pressure is ON – for ol’ vamp, the woman, the readers —- and the author!
Sounds like quite a dark tryst.
LOL – good pun
Hmmm, but I think I’m missing the former story!
If you can’t click on the link above – try this, Georgia > http://wp.me/p1YE83-1nT
Ooooo…really inviting! 🙂
Aha! Naughty – but what the heck – enjoy 🙂
Christopher Lee was my favourite Hollywood vampire —- tall, dark and intense
He wasn’t at all bad actually, I saw him many a time! I wonder, did Johnny Depp ever try vampiring?
Johnny Depp – not that I know of. The last I saw him, he was sinking with his pirates’ ship into a whirlpool. He is Deep 🙂
Oh I think he’s done something since…I’ll have to look into that…he’s played some pretty gruesome parts you know, I’d be surprised he never tried to be a vampire!
Dark (K)night, black satin, black hearts entwined. punctured love. 😉 xPenx
Yes, the dark Mysterious One is a past master in puncturing – jugular veins as well as love.
I particularly like this dialogue:
“Love? How can I love —- when I don’t have a heart!”
I like the way you describe her clothing after bath “Black satins” 🙂
Ah, yes, Yoshiko dear – there is something about black satins that draws out the animal in most men – or, should that be – draws out animal-like men 😈
Why, Eric? I don’t understand this. First time to hear this
Really, Yoshiko – I hope you’re not teasing me.
Anyway, ask your husband as he would be better placed to enlighten you.
Peace,
Eric
Yeah, Eric, I’m not teasing you. Am I living in the cave? Because my husband tend to laugh at me in what I don’t know? 🙁
LOL – okay, I shall email you 😳
Thank you, Eric, my email is zyoshiko@rocketmail.com
Love will find a way in. Vampires are so much fun!
Okay Susan – I know you have a weak spot for these tall dark beings of the night. There are four parts to this little series – wait for the last one.
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