Peace eludes my heart
Your magical love binds me
Bee without honey
*** Copyright @ Eric Alagan, 2017 ***
Historical fiction mostly, but also some multi-genre stories & anecdotes
Historical fiction mostly, but also some multi-genre stories & anecdotes
Peace eludes my heart
Your magical love binds me
Bee without honey
*** Copyright @ Eric Alagan, 2017 ***
can not live without
your love that deceives me so
please take my heart’s key
🙂
Wonderful haiku, Eric, that sadly speaks of love for many…
Wishing you a peaceful tomorrow, Lauren
Key opens one’s heart
Time reveals treasure or trash
Choices make or break.
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Hello Lauren,
Thank you and yes, all seek love and hope to ride into the sunset. The lucky ones find true love.
Peace to you too,
Eric
Melancholia:
Bereaved, it clutches my heart
Lost without your Love.
Yet once again a poignant poem, dear Sir. Clever, as well, your replies in haiku form. Great to catch up with your wit and wisdom, my friend!
Warmest wishes,
Paul 🙂 🙂 🙂
A tormented soul
Impoverished impotent
Dear Love, come to me.
He honours me so
Deserving, perhaps not me
Flourishing friendship 🙂
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Dear Paul,
Ordinarily, bloggers post haiku on their own blogs – and rightly so. But you so generously share them here. Both your haiku are excellent, and speak volumes. I hope my readers pay your blog a visit too. You’re a rare type of friend and I’m blessed.
Peace, my dear friend,
Eric
Tender and poignant, and sad. 🙁
Busy though she is
Re-modelling her boat home
Takes time to stop by 🙂
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Hello Sarah,
Many thanks for stopping by with a comment.
Cheers,
Eric
And thank you for the personalised haiku. Have a good weekend. 🙂
Reblogged this on LostInThoughts.
Much appreciate the reblog 🙂
Haikus flow everywhere these days but few have the depth that you bring to yours, As usual, thank you for stimulating at many levels and being so profound. In lieu of peace I buzz about your talent!
A good friend uplifts
Or, mere tinder I remain
Grateful for the spark 🙂
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Hello Jane,
As usual, you are so very generous. A simple stroke of a brush – and you take away so much from it. Is this a reflection on the author? I doubt, for quite often, we merely toss a pebble. It takes the wise to discern the truths contained in the ripples.
Peace,
Eric
A bee without honey will quickly die. Let’s hope the bee finds it’s source of life. Very deep Eric, you have me wondering here.:)
Lovesick, an illness
Fatal it is, untreated
One person holds cure 🙂
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Hello Ian,
What you say is very true. Most folks know that bees are crucial for our survival too.
Peace,
Eric
Love is simple yet complex.
Simple in its genuineness, complex in it’s intention.
A child senses and interpretes better than adults.
Not surprising that peace fills and eludes at the same time.
Love is enigmatic, I think.
‘Known’ you for years now
Intellectual, you have grown 🙂
You enhance my blog
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Hello Windy dear,
I have much to learn from you and of you.
Cheers,
Eric
You have always inspired, set my grey cells working.
Whoever named them grey cells had it so appropriate, not white or black cells.
Grey because there are many view points. I have learnt this and much more from you, Eric.
Excellent.
With great hope I wait
For a comment more unique
But unique this is 🙂
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Thank you, and have a good one!
I’ll try the next time. 🙂