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Fiction, Flash-Fiction, Horror, Life, Love, Micro Fiction, Relationships, Stories, Word Count 33, Writing
Vampyre – Part Three of Four
Many of us are suckers for love – and when promised eternal love, how does our young lady respond.
For earlier 33-word episodes of her stay in a hotel during a business trip, and how she met this dark, mysterious man please click on:
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Look out for the fourth and final part on Tuesday 25 June
I shall also provide a prompt word and call for
Your 33-word Flash Fiction contributions
Hope you can all participate
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That would definitely be a bad dream for me. LOL
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Well, she sure woke up from a nightmare but as the last episode will reveal, she has not woken up to the life he has given her – or it is the life he had taken away from her.
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Okay, Eric, I’m a sucker for love, but sealed with blood is where I draw the line! 🙂 Great writing, my friend! Cheers!
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Just as well, Lauren.
When one considers how gross it is to drink another’s blood – the allure of the tall dark stranger fades.
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Effective writing
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Thank you and have a great day – don’t forget that facemask when you step out.
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Don’t have one :)) yet to buy. Thank you for the kind suggestion. any idea when it’d stop? 🙂
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Padmini – this haze will not stop soon. At 300 plus PSI – it is very hazardous. Please, you must use face masks – use it all the time if you need to step outdoors. Keep the doors and windows at home shut. Use the aircon if you can. Check the internet and/or Channel News Asia for updates. No need to panic but we need to take serious precautions.
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Okay, thank you for informing and reminding. will use it. Thank you
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True, we are keeping the door and windows closed, but still can’t keep away the burnt smell. It wasn’t like this for the past two years I SG, I suppose
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This is the worst in the last 16 years – quite shocking for all of us – almost like in Beijing – the pollution here. And caused by our great friends in Indonesia.
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Aha, so she is cursed now, bet she can levitate or fly and find other drakul. She needs blood, new men and night life..woohoo !
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Well, hello there,
Me thinks Jasey would love such a visit from the tall Dark One
Me thinks Jasey would love a new man to sink into every night
Me thinks that’s why Jasey says “Woohoo!”
Me thinks, Jasey should wait for the finale before accepting the plunge – pun intended
That’s what me thinks 👿
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why can’t i have a dream like that?!?!
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You know, ever since I launched this tiny vampire series – I’ve learnt something about women and their wild side.
And I thought all along that men took risks with love – no wait a moment. Men take risks with sex. Women risk it all for love!
Okay, now it all makes sense —- for now —- sort of —- I think 😕
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She woke with a start, what a dream! Scary thoughts
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I wonder whether it was a dream, Barb. This was not their first encounter —
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Yikes! This is one seriously compromised damsel even if it is giving her pleasure. Terse and evocative – congratulations Eric, Jane.
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Oh, thank you Jane – for your ever presence here and encouraging comments.
Yes, I agree with you totally but as you can gauge, there are quite a few damsels who would love to be in her shoes – or, prehaps they are all being a tad naughty 🙂 All in good fun, I say.
Have a great weekend dear,
Eric
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Ooooooo…never liked the illusion of eternal love…now you’ve given me a valid reason to explain my aversion! 🙂
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Well Georgia dear – wait for the final episode on Tuesday and you’ll have a far better reason to add to your aversion. This I promise.
Peace,
Eric
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Looking forward to it!
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I do appreciate the flavour of your forays into the dark side, Eric – spiced with wit, sautéed in quirkiness and often garnished with a surprising twist…
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Cooking in the dark side, I see, Maxy baby 🙂
Many thanks for your visit and comment,
Eric
P/s Something wrong with your blog link – can’t get through, only managed to tick “like” – shall try again later.
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love & life make up an eternal oxymoron, they say!
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LOL – Is that what they say?
I clicked on your link > soulinkedrandomness.wordpress.com > and WP says, no such blog. You might want to check your settings.
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soulinkblog.wordpress.com it is, my frn!
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Okay, thank you – but it shows as > soulinkedrandomness.wordpress.com > You can view this in your Comments Admin, probably due to the original Settings when you started your blog. This makes it impossible for anyone to click into your blog when they receive your comments in their blogs.
Goto – Dashboard > My Blogs (and select the correct blog address) – See if that works.
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I have changed the web address now.
Thanks for bringing that up, hope u like the blog too.
🙂
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Okay, works now – hopefully this draws more traffic your way.
Cheers,
Eric
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Thanks 🙂
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did not see that last line coming.. 🙂 great twist.
groetjes, Francina
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Hello Francina,
Yes, I leave it to the reader to draw on what that means – she woke up – from her nightmare, or her folly.
You have a great weekend too. Nice photo image that – in your blog post.
Ciao, Eric 🙂
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When you are offering an eternal undead existence, life and death are just semantics, or at least two sides of the same coin.
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Interesting word – semantics.
Cheers,
Eric
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Great twist! It was only a dream. You are such a tease!
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Was it really a dream, my dear – or, did she snap awake – wait for the final episode 👿
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You really are a tease!
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I like this 33 word flash series. Great idea. Thanks for following my blog, too!
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Hello Connie,
Yes, why say more when we can say all with less.
Thank you for following my blog and my apologies for taking this long to get around to following your blog – I’m sort of playing catch up here.
Cheers,
Eric
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Dream within a dream, or nightmare awakening to come? wait and see time, (terrible I be at patience!!) xPenx
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Yes, a dream or a nightmare – the full bladdered wait for relief and enlightenment – on Tuesday 25 June 🙂
Meanwhile, have a great weekend ahead,
Eric
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O dear, this kind of dream leaves its owner asking questions in the wake of consciousness.
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Yes, and if only it were a dream — what if she tasted blood on her lips — what thoughts will wreck her then, I wonder.
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I wouldn’t want to be in her shoes
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Clever girl – better to consort with a man who dares to walk under the glare of light – sunlight!
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“she woke up – from her nightmare, or her folly.” Sounds like a sneak peek into Episode 4. Not until Tuesday?
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Breads crumbs we leave – leading to the door of mysteries – knock and it shall open, on Tuesday the twenty fifth 🙂
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Still loving it!!
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One more snippet and we are there, Willow dear.
All good wishes,
Eric
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Eternal love or temporary lust? The question. Lots to think on here
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Good question. You’re right – lots to think here.
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want to dream like that , It must be me, dark and dangerous cravings
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Enjoy the moment, Somi dear – before the sun rises and he flaps away 🙂
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Oh Darn…I had a notification for you new post, but it doesn’t open! It was entitled Animal Welfare.
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Oh, Georgia – I was loading a draft and accidentally hit the ‘post’ button 😦
When I realised the error, I deleted that ‘post’ – my apologies.
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No problem, just thought I’d lost it. That has happened to me once too…meant to save a draft and hit publish instead!
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Exciting and excited. Don’t know whether to think of this as a dream or a nightmare.
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Decisions – decisions 🙂
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That is eternal love… is it a curse or a blessing? Hmm!
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Wait for the final part – then decide 🙂
P/s I tried to post a comment on your blog and strangely (for the first time) it prompts me for my name, email, etc – is NSA at work, I wonder
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oh nooo, you couldn’t comment?! Were you logged into WP at the time? Big Brother is watching… lol
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Yes, I was logged into WP – but it is working now, as I managed to leave a comment 🙂
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Yay! I do like comments 🙂 Thanks, Eric
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for me it is the perfect love, awaited since eternity and lived through ages.
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Okay Soumya dear
Let’s see what happens in the final part on Tuesday.
All good wishes,
Eric
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Eternal life with the human race hell-bent of self destruction. Awful lonely after…
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Some believe in eternal life – but certainly not on this hell hole which is earth!
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What an expression ‘ sealed with….’ but a good one. I never used to read this genre but my daughter and you made me take interest in this.
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Thank you my dear – ah, yes, Somi is something else. Her posts always give me a laugh and something to chew on.
Peace, Eric
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