Note from Eric: I’m down with a bad flu and unable to visit/post comments on your weblogs. I’ll do the best I can but rest assured will catch up in a few days or so…
For someone with a bad cold, you certainly captivated me in these 33 words. How can you leave us dangling here? This is a great example of an attention grabbing beginning to a novel or short story!
I like!
Thank you 🙂
You gave me a little chill….creepy indeed! 🙂
Celeste
Brrrrr… 🙂
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Well, that’s a creepy scene! I’d sure want to get away from there fast.
Yup, don’t we all…but the door is locked and she is stuck in the far end…
For someone with a bad cold, you certainly captivated me in these 33 words. How can you leave us dangling here? This is a great example of an attention grabbing beginning to a novel or short story!
Actually, now that you mention it, I might consider weaving a short story around this…thanks for the heads up 🙂