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“contd from The Journey Begins*
Daniel’s stooped figure cast a long shadow on the wind swept beach. That incident in the mountain cabin, was it a nightmare? But I was there, surely.
A shot of sharp pain spiked up his shin and brought him barrelling back to the present.
A child? Where did he come from?
Sitting on his haunches, a boy was scooping water into a pail, yet moments ago, except for a few sea birds, the place was deserted.
Daniel approached the small angelic person. Odd, is that smoke? The brisk wind carried away his muse but not the smell. Drawing close, he cast his evening shadow on the child.
The boy looked up, his creamy face scrunched with annoyance. The sun caught his clear ocean blue eyes.
The old priest winced, a sharp premonition pricked without planting. Those eyes…No, it can’t be. They’re blue.
The boy crooked his head sideways and returned the old man’s rheumy gaze.
“What’re you doing, son?”
“Why silly, can’t you see?” Moments passed. “I’m emptying the ocean.” The child turned away and busied with water and pail.
“Why would you want to take the ocean?” The old man pressed. Strange. Why this feeling of foreboding?
“Because, it’s mine.” The imp waved an arm and said, “All of this…Mine.” He returned to his task.
Those eyes look familiar but…yes, probably mistaken.
The priest gave himself to loud convulsive coughs. He wiped his lips with a white handkerchief, sullied now by thick phlegm streaked with bright blood. Seeing the boy’s attention fell on the blood stained cloth, the priest thrust it into his pocket.
“You’re dying, old man.” The child’s voice acquired an edge and his smile lifted a corner of his lips. His eyes had turned deep brown.
“You!” Goose bumps blistered. The old priest’s hand shook and his voice quavered. “I know you.” He staggered back, his jowls wobbled and colour ran off his face. “Be gone, Satan.” His entire frame trembled and tears filled and blurred his vision.
The boy stood up, slow and deliberate, and grew tall and broad. The huge figure bent, bringing his face close to the shaking old man. “You know me, Daniel.” The voice was low, guttural. “The harvest is ripe.”
Daniel smelled dry burnt breath. He blinked away tears and stared into deep red unmoving eyes.
The spectre grinned, bared its teeth and slowly faded.
The old priest shuddered. A stirring at his tailbone spread up to the base of his cranium. He had visions of a serpent uncoiling from its slumber, waving about and seeking. As he gaped, it struck with blinding fury and lightning speed.
A sharp pain seared his mind. Mental flashes of his life…lives…zoomed past. He choked and his head distended. His terror gave way to puzzlement, and features softened as he fell in slow motion.
People ran up with shouts for help. Faces in shadows crowded over him, blocking out the sun.
That’s so strange…Only moments ago the beach was deserted except for…
His eyes flickered as the crowd gawked.
A handsome and ageless face, shining with tranquillity, appeared in the old man’s greying vision. A beautiful fragrance filled the air.
I know you…from that day…the mountain cabin –.
Their eyes locked. The dying man proffered a weak smile. His eyelids fluttered in death as raw darkness clouded out his senses.
“I bid you welcome home Daniel, my Son.”
To be continued…
(For earlier episodes, please look under Categories – Fallen Grace – left hand column)
************ Copyright @ Eric Alagan, 2013 ************
Wow very strong and ominous. I can’t wait to read more.
Hello Susan,
Thank you. Another installment coming up Wednesday 30 Jan. Hope not to disappoint.
Cheers, Eric
Wow, very intense, Eric! Your writing is so compelling that it pulls the reader in! I look forward to more! Have a great weekend!
You are so sweet with your complimemts Lauren. Thank you and have a great weekend ahead, Eric
Hello Eric – I just wanted to stop by & let you know that I nominated your work for the “Blog of the Year 2012″ award! More details can be found here: http://arcanearrangements.com/2013/01/25/blog-of-the-year-2012-part-three/ Keep up the great work & enjoy the day!
Thank you Josh. This is lovely.
Happy blogging and have a great weekend ahead,
Eric
You are very welcome! Thanks- I hope you have a great weekend as well, take care!
P/s Left a comment in your post – you might want to retrieve it from your spam folder.
~ looks as though more than one has been down this road. Very vivid!
Very true. It is a journey we all must make. But what lies beyond — Fallen Grace explores one possibility.
Fine read! Glad to see you back again and going strong, Eric.
Thank you. I will pop over to read more of your posts. Have a good one, Eric
I’m waiting also.
Hello Yoshiko – some of the subsequent installments might seem controversial but it will all come out in the wash. Hope your weekend is coming along alright. Cheers, Eric
I got it. I also hope your weekend is coming along alright. God bless, Yoshiko
Waiting for more
Coming to your local blog on Wednesday 30 January – the continuation of Jesuit priest Daniel Ellsworth’s journey
Glad to have you visit Ramu. Always appreciate this, Eric
As usual Eric, you are the master of the mysteries
I do treasure your generosity.
As you probably gathered, I am reading through all your previous posts – invigorating and informative. Have a good one, Eric
Terrific narrative writing — takes the reader right to the scene, just like watching the whole episode in panoramic cinematography!
OMG, Dee – you are so florid with your observations. Thank you my dear, Eric
Ackkk to be continued…. wow, good one here Eric. Happy to see you, it has been a while!
Hello Christy – Glad you found this read a “wow” – hope to keep that ‘wow factor’ up.
Plan to drop by your blog soon and see what you’ve been up to. I’m sure it’ll not disappoint.
Cheers, Eric
This was very good! I felt his fear when faced with Satan and his calm when he saw Jesus in the end. I, too, look forward to more of Daniel’s story.
Hello Jana – we all peer into the mirror and take away something different. Have a great week ahead, Eric
Terrific, missed the first so went back to catch up. Love the build up, love the storytelling! Can’t wait for the next installation.
Thank you Val.
The theme might be a little controversial but an open mind will help with the journey. Next installment coming up on Wednesday 1000 hours, Singapore time.
Cheers, Eric
Oh my gosh! I am so glad I stumbled on this today! Terrific read Mr. Eric, I am definitely going back for the previous episodes!
Oh, I am so glad you find it so. What a tonic for a writer – keeps me going. All good wishes, Eric
This is my kind of story
It’s not everyone’s cup of tea – but am glad it is yours, Eric
Oh dear, the “chill” continues. So this is what it’s going to be like when we face death, almost a roller coaster ride of past and present – your god and your devil. You are making us sit on the edge for the next slot, feels horrid yet excited…
Thank you for following these installments.
To truly know, we too must the journey make.
You have a great and interesting site. I’m looking forward to reading more.
Thanks for looking at my blog, I hope you explore more.
Thank you and you’re very welcome. Will drop over again and soon.
Hi Eric: Your writing has a surreal dream-like quality which makes it very potent. You include enough description to create an image but not so much that you lose my attention. Keep going and I’ll follow along. Cheerio, Jane
Hello Jane,
Thank you for your visit and feedback. I welcome comments on my writing style/voice as this helps me improve.
Next installment coming up in a couple of hours. Hope it does not disappoint.
Cheers, Eric
What a transcendent ride from part I to part II….I am completely awestruck in the manifestation of your mind onto ink. Going to read part III !
(Yes, I am now receiving notifications of new posts as part III just came through).
Eric – you are brilliant.
there is a poem on my blog “They say”, by Mahlaqa, check it out – it resonates a little with the mystical realm. love & regards.
Glad that Part 3 came through and thank you for your compliments Shaheen. I’ll be checking out “They say”
Much luv and hugz, Eric
Glad you came by and liked my post. This piece certainly turns my head around. Well done.
I enjooyed my visit to your blog. Glad you felt the same way about this post. Cheers, Eric
Your writing is poetic and masterful! I’m hooked.
Wow! Such lovely outpouring of compliments. Will certainly drive me to polish and re-polish my post before loading. Thank you Connie, words such as yours keep writers like me going.
A nice writeup.
Hello Neelkanth,
Thank you for your visit and comment. I missed this and do apologise.
Cheers,
Eric
P/s I started following your blog recently.
Well written
Thank you for your liking and following my blog. I too have liked yours and am following you with immediate effect.
You’re welcome Neelkanth. Happy journey
Why is that little boys can sometimes be more menacing than demon forms?
Hello Emmy,
Perhaps it’s because we let our guard down – he is only a kid — perhaps.
Thank you for the visit and comment,
Eric
P/s The Dark Prince is coming along well, I read.
my own journey continues… xx
God’s speed – what a pun