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The howling wind smashed glassware and Daniel shot up with a shock. Grimacing with pain, he hobbled to slam shut the door. Turning, he gritted his teeth and crossed the small living room to close the clapping kitchen windows.
He froze.
The trees outside were still, even their leaves remained unruffled.
A deep sigh reached him from behind and the hair on his neck stood rigid.
With a start, he turned and braced his hands on the kitchen sink. The small living room was in semi darkness and the wood-fired hearth threw grotesque dancing shadows on the timber walls. Daniel paused. Listened. Nothing. He did not expect his friend, who owned the mountain cabin, to return before the morning. In any event, he had not heard the sound of a car.
What a dreadful smell. Where was it coming from –? That gravelly sigh again, this time more pronounced, unmistakeable.
His hand, shaking in gentle palsy, Daniel reached and clasped the crucifix hanging around his neck.
“That trinket is an insult.” A voice growled.
Daniel crossed himself and muttered a prayer. “You will not fear the terror of night, nor the arrow that flies by day –”
“You fool,” the voice rasped, “if these were truly words written under divine grace, I would burn now.”
One of the shadows stopped flickering and moved towards him.
Daniel’s hand tightened and the crucifix bit into his flesh. “My Lord.” This was not a dream. Another prayer. “Whatever you bind on earth shall be bound in heaven, and whatever you loose on earth shall be loosed in heaven.” Strange, he thought, why recite these –?
Laughter reverberated through the wooden cabin. The fireside dimmed. ”Fool!” The voice spat. It was clear, deep and scratchy. “I hold the keys. Your church worships me, the golden calf.”
The shadow distended and a hoofed leg stepped out with a distinct and heavy thud. Daniel’s eyes bulged and his pulse raced. It can’t be.
Again, that deep drawl rolled. “Your brothers of the cloth have been doing my bidding since Nicene.” A second hoofed leg appeared with a thud. “Remain within the fold and I might let you live.”
A large goatish creature, upright on hind legs, emerged from the shadows and stomped forward.
“You know me Daniel.” The shadow snarled and its jaws pulled back. “Don’t cross me or you’ll know more than fear.” Its eyes shone red and peered deep into Daniel’s very soul. The narrow, unblinking slits came closer and closer…until…A sharp pain clutched Daniel’s chest and he felt his knees giving way. With a soft gasp he slumped.
Images flashed, disjointed, confusing. Horses galloped. Men fought, died on the great rolling Asian Steppes. Green fields glistened red with blood. Throaty vultures and cackling jackals quarrelled, tore and feasted on cadavers. Huge sailing ships manned by Oriental warriors. On the foredeck of a majestic ship, stood a man in the fine embroided silks of the ancient Chinese court. He turned and Daniel took a sharp intake of breath. Those dull black eyes – eyes that morphed into deep red unblinking slits.
Then, something else. Another presence, soft and soothing, entered Daniel’s hazy vision. A gentle familiar face appeared. The man’s eyes blue and his features distinguished. He smiled, filling Daniel with peace. What an ageless handsome man.
Who are you…who are –?
(To be continued…)
********** Copyright @ Eric Alagan 2013 **********
welcome back — and this looks like a great return.
Thank you. I’ve been wanting to get back here but it has taken some doing. I plan to start slow and crank up again. Cheers, Eric
Happy New Year! Hope you and your family are well! Welcome back
Thank you Aparna dear and a very happy 2013 for you and all your loved ones.
My family is well and all is good. Great to be back.
Eric
Welcome back Eric. You have honed your skills as a writer further during the absence it seems. I have been mostly off the internet for a couple of months due to time spent selling my home and then moving into this retirement resort. It will take at least another month to have all the alterations made that we require but most of our things are in place.
Hey there Ian, great to hear from you and thrilled to be back. I have all your posts archived and shall relish them over the next few weeks.
Happy to know that your plans are taking shape. Wishing you all the very best and looking forward to our old exchanges.
- Eric
Thank you Eric. Happy New Year to you and your family.
welcome back Eric! looking forward for more action from you !
A very happy new year
Soumya dear – I am somewhat embarrassed to have been away so long from Blogsville and having neglected all my blogging friends. Great to be back and a (belated) Happy, Healthy and Prosperous 2013 to you and your loved ones.
Thank you Eric! you are always welcome !
Hey, Eric- Welcome back! Happy New Year & I hope that all is well over there!
Hello Josh,
Thank you and great to be back too. All is well and trust the same holds true over at your end too.
Happy New Year and all good wishes to you too,
Eric
Wish you a Happy New Year. Looking to read more of this story. Thanks for visiting my blog today:)
Thank you. Yes, I shall be posting the continuation in the next few days. All good wishes for the year ahead, Eric
Wow, so long haven’t heard from you. Nice to see you back.
Beautiful. And I will be waiting for the next part.
Wish you happy new year 2013.
Hello Hikari – thank you for ‘checking’ on me when I was MIA. As mentioned, I was swamped with work – still am – but with slightly less pressure now.
I shall post the next part in the coming week.
All good wishes to you and your loved ones for 2013
Eric
Thank you and good wishes to you and your loved ones as well.
Eric, wish you happy new year 2013. Welcome back. I’m so glad to see you back.
I will be waiting for the next section.
Dear Yoshiko,
Wishing you all nice things for 2013 too. It is good to be back and I shall post the next part of this fictional journey in the coming week.
Have a great weekend ahead,
Eric
Dear Eric,
I also wish you to have a great weekend ahead.
Yoshiko
First – I’m so glad you’re back. Hope is going well with you.
Second – this is very intriguing scene. A teaser, almost – I’m waiting to see what’s next.
Hello Kilroy – how is it going over at your end? Will be dropping by your blog as I wade through…
Glad you liked this opening “tease” and I hope to maintain the intrigue in the coming episodes.
Have a good one, Eric
… what the devil?
Yes – it is about the devil
Welcome back Eric, I’ve missed reading your words. How is your latest book coming?
Hello Susan dear. Will certainly be paying you a visit soon.
I shall be posting a full length fictional journey by a Jesuit in Fallen Grace. Not for the faint hearted or dogmatic. Hope you’ll be intrigued enough to “follow.”
Revising my latest novel – also bogged down with several screenplays and TV drama scripts I am working on.
Have a great weekend, Eric
Eric happy 2013, great story! @D
Hello @D
Wishing you a Happy, Healthy and Prosperous 2013 too.
Glad you like this opening scene – plan to build on it in every way.
Cheers, Eric
Adding to all the welcomes … Good to see you back, hope all is well, and you are thriving …
Hello Peter – good to have you visit too. Chugging along alright. All good wishes, Eric
Welcome Back

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How have you been
Hello, hello, hello
Great to be back and I am good.
I see that you’ve been busy on Blogsville.
Catch up with you next week Cat – when you are ‘back’
Cheers, Eric
yes creating creating creating


Glad You are good
been a long time
cheers
C
So good that you’re back!
Good to be back too. Will be dropping by your blog soon
Hello Eric
I am happy to see you and welcome back! I wish you all the best in life for this year 2013 and through the years to come… See you around buddy! xoxo
Hello Dolly – good to be back. I see that you’ve been keeping very busy. Happy blogging year ahead dear, Eric
I will add my welcome to all the others. You’ve been gone a long time. Meanwhile I have moved to a new place, close to my wife’s church, we had a blizzard, pipes froze, and then a heat wave. Very eventful.
I am glad you are back. This is an intriguing start. Have you been reading Frank Peretti? “This Present Darkness”? He tried to do something like this, but was hampered by his lack of imagination and his theology. Very enjoyable books on the whole though, and I expect you will handle it very well. I am looking forward to it.
Wow! Carroll,
Speak of blowing hot and cold. Some people might actually relish this – sitting in a hot sauna, then rushing out to plunge into frigid waters. Anyway, I assume you are happy in your new place.
Frank Peretti? No, I can’t say that I even heard of him.
What I am writing might come across as a little controversial but if people stuck to the end, they will see how it all comes out in the wash.
I hope not to disappoint.
All good wishes, Eric
By heatwave I mean about 50 degrees. That’s as good as it gets up here this time of year. I doubt I would survive the sauna experience.
I will stick to it to the end and I have no doubt you will not disappoint.
Welcome back , Eric! You and your writings have been missed.
groetjes, Francina
Good to be back Francina. You are so very kind. Cheers, Eric
Come back, my friend after a sojourn….
Great to be back Jay.
Eric
You still have that touch – shall return to relish.
wonderful imagery powerful
Thank you. Hope to build on this.
Hello Sir,
Welcome back. Blogosphere was empty without you.
And the story is mysterious. I’m curious to know more. Will read the next part when you post.
Take care.
Hello Ramu – these are very generous words
Thank you and will try to keep up with this story so as not to disappoint. All good wishes, Eric
If this is your opening chapter, a very captivating scene indeed. It evokes fear subtly but the impact is extremely hair-raising. The scenes to follow would be more intriguing I believe.
A powerful return after a long vacation from blogsville but we do not expect any less especially from you. Welcome back.
You are very kind Jasey. Pressure, pressure
Hope not to disappoint, Eric
Glad you came by and liked my post. I certainly enjoyed yours. Good journey.
Thank you and all good wishes, Eric
Thanks for visiting me! I think I may stick around to see what happens next, how deep the weaving goes.
Hello Simon,
Welcome, make yourself at home.
All good wishes,
Eric
I read Part 2 first and fell in-love. This is even better. What amazing creativity Mr. Eric. Keep them coming!
Installment Three due on Wednesday Jan 30th at 1000 hours, Singapore time. Cheers, Eric
Love your story, it hits home – I find familiarity within the story as I read each line.
Hmmm, I need to read your posts and will swing around to your blog. Looks like you’ve had some personal experiences here, or have read much on this/similar topics.
Oh what’s the saying… “I could write a book” but I think I’ll leave that up to you. I’m more of a poetry writer, and you could certainly find my experiences intertwined in the words. My experiences have been the catalyst for me to search and find ideas and stories that are relatable, even if they are only fiction.
Eric:
I love the way you crafted the last two paragraphs. Each, individually with harmonious content and style; yet, the two working an Incredible dynamic between them: the first, strong, sharp and alerting; the next, soft, smooth and comforting.
You’re quite an Artiste! One can almost hear the rapid blushing of Dante’s cheeks.
Keep it going, Sir!
~kp
Well KP,
Thank you for these compliments. It is somewhat scary what you say and only because you pulled out exactly what was going through my mind when I wrote this episode. It is heartening to know that it came through.
Will try not to disappoint,
Eric
P/s As you probably gathered I thoroughly enjoyed your “Knotty Knuggets” and plan to return soon
Mission Accomplished … and then some. No dissappointment whatever. However, you set the bar rather high for yourself … and others. I don’t know about other readers, but you put me in some other place.
Keep Going!
~kp … and thanks for the compliment. It was quite generous.
Eric–I am totally captivated,the age old good vs. evil tale. It is well crafted indeed
thank you for sharing this, am looking forward to reading more!
Hello Connie – or would you prefer Cornelia.
It is good vs evil – and thank you for your encouraging words. I’m polishing up the next installment for release tomorrow.
Hope you enjoy it too,
Eric
I prefer Connie, thanks, I’m sure I will!
Wow! What a brilliant writer you are, dear Eric (but, you know this!). I have missed reading your work as I am unable to get to your blog from mine – how come dear? This time I entered through Soumyav’s blog after clicking your name on her post.
I would like to visit you often if there is a way directly from mine, also my subcription to your blog does not come through…
Loved the piece and now shall read part II.
Lots of love & light.
Dear Shaheen,

What a wonderful compliment. Thank you
I have no idea why you can’t get to my blog. I do know that when you click my name it takes you to a page that says my blog does not exist – strange. I have written to WP Support and await their reply. Meanwhile, click on my gravatar and you’ll see my blog. Sorry about this.
Incidentally, your subscription did come through this morning – though I am unsure whether it will work. I am loading a new post today – let’s see if it notifies you.
Glad you love this piece. Installment three will be up in an hour or so.
Lots of luv and hugz,
Eric
Amazing, I got a notification about the 3rd part of this and wanted to read it from the beginning. I’m missing a lot because I am busy these days :/
Your way of writing is really inspiring…
Thank you for the visit and lovely comment – always welcomed
Hope you get over this busy hump nicely.
Cheers, Eric
Thank you for reading and liking my blog. I am so pleased to have found your blog and I really like it. The story was very inspiring. I was just in the process of beginning to write a fictional story before reading your post. I became totally inspired as I read and fell into your story.
That’s really cool, Craig.
All writers (well, certainly in my case) want to inspire others to write. Glad to be of some small help.
Enjoyed your post and shall return.
All good wishes,
Eric
I like this a lot. But how do you arrange the category so that the story reads from chapter one?
Hello Bumba – I am restricted by WP’s format – unless someone can show me how to rearrange. Until then, Go to Categories and start (from the bottom) Fallen Grace – 1 and work your way back.
I am loving this! (I wrote a poetic piece called, ‘fallen from grace’… this title is what drew me to your site/post here. And I love what I have found! ) You will see more of me here. ~Jen
Hello Jen,
Lovely of you to return visit and post your comment.
I just checked out your poem > Fallen from Grace. Wow! You have been through a real rough patch. What you have accomplished and what you are doing are truly inspirational.
Please do look around and make yourself at home,
Eric
P/s I left a comment but looks like it went into your spam folder
Yes Hi!! I will check for your comment.. (be rt bk)….
I’m back and may I say, thank you. Thank you very much! I’m honored that you came to Tryst!! I will be back here to read more of you… ~Jen
Hi Eric — thanks so much for visiting my site and deciding to follow. I am following you also, at the recommendation of Tomas, who has informed me that you have a wonderful series going here — “Fallen Grace.” I look forward to reading all of it in a bit, as I am currently reading a 1300 page historical novel about the Irish city of Dubh Lynn. But promise to get to yours. Hugs to you, Alia
Thank you Alia for your return visit and “Follow”.
And a big “Thank you” to Tomas for referring you to my blog
To help spread the joy, we need to bring the “new normal”, as it were, to all who thirst. There are many dedicated blogs and excellent sources where information – knowledge – is freely available for harvest. Unfortunately, excellent as they are, zeal drives some of these sources and this comes across a tad too heavy for the browsers (read, potential believers).
My approach is to present this “new normal” in a fun and unobtrusive way – via a novel broken down into chewable bites.
Hence, my serial – Fallen Grace – each episode no more than 3 minutes read that traces Daniel’s journey from the World of Illusion to the World of Reality. He drops breadcrumbs along the way.
I hope these breadcrumbs pique my readers enough to search out the abovementioned sources and blogs to arm them as they set forth in the greatest exploration ever undertaken by Humankind.
Ambitious? I hope not but every candle lit, adds to Illumination to drive out the Illusion.
I’m following your site and you’ll be seeing me around.
All good wishes, Eric
P/s Left this comment in your About page.
Hi Eric — Last night I made a decision to take the 1300 page book back to the library and use the time to visit more with my friends in Blog Land. So I’ll be getting to Fallen Grace sooner. I like the “drip system” for dispensing information and love that you are presenting the “new normal” on your blog in a way that new readers can absorb it without getting overloaded. Glad to have your comments and input, as it is your pleasure to do so. Hugs to you, Alia
I would not have found you if you did not like something I wrote. For allowing me to find this I thank you. I hope you continue soon I enjoyed what I read.
I admire your spunk. You are Shadow – (not a shadow, but Shadow). My blog post of that same title scheduled for 16 Feb. I invite you to read it – not to build traffic for my blog but because some of what I say there might resonate with you.
Thank you for following my blog. I am honoured and I am also following your blog.
Meanwhile herein a snippet > Light exposes, judges and shames. (But I, I serve in the Dark – to cloak your shame, but not mine – never mine).
Peace, Eric
P/S I left this comment on your blog. Hopefully, it came through. If not, please check your spam)
Having seen your ‘Fallen Grace’ parts dropping in my follow list, I decided to start with number one first. Glad I did! Loved the ominous scene. I’ll be on to part 2 soon.
Hello Emmy – as you know I started following your blog and your First Breath is a nice hook. Looking forward to the next instalment.
Glad you found Fallen Grace too.
I guess we’ll be reading each other more
Cheers, Eric
P/s Left this comment in First Breath
Eric Thank you for the visit and follow on my blog myownheart.me, I am so honored that you would think my blog worth following! I have two others one is thelordswitness and myblog. my blog is on domestic violence. I read “Fallen Grace” part 1 and will be back to read more after church this morning. You are quite the talent .:)
That is so sweet of you Len.
I left a few comments in your blog and hope these came through.
Yes, I’ll be reading you more often and hope to see you around here too.
All good wishes,
Eric
many thanks for the visit to my blog…looking forward to further reading of yours.
You’re very welcome and I look forward to reading more of yours too.
All good wishes,
Eric
Ooh, a macabre, menacing start! Debating the wisdom of continuing at this late hour….:-)
Ah, as long as when the windows clap – just hope there is a real wind blowing – not an ill wind.
Wow! Story started off with a bang almost right away. You’ve caught my interest. It may take me some time, but I look forward to reading the rest of it.
Oh, it is so nice you want to read more. Like all writers, no greater reward for me than to have my works read.
A good place to start is the page Fallen Grace > http://wp.me/P1YE83-10c The episode links are in chronological order. I post these episodes once a week on Sundays – please take your time to catch up.
All good wishes Maryam and thank you,
Eric
Great flow, visuals, you had me on the edge of my seat. Please tell me there’s more.
Hello Ingrid,
Glad you like the start. Please go to my Fallen Grace page and you’ll see all the episodes here > http://wp.me/P1YE83-10c
Take your time, as I post them once a week.
Cheers, Eric
Well I won’t sleep tonight after reading this. Written eerily well.
Thank you ginny,
If you catch some time – read the rest here > http://wp.me/P1YE83-10c
Sweet dreams
Eric
Hi Eric thanks for liking my poem … I followed the arrow back to read your story. Your story (despite the fact that God made me walk the journey of the devil as a part of my learning … and when my mind questioned Him as to why it existed in the first place … His amazing reply that it was a man thing) I will go into understanding this in more detail with him later … but I did not like the answer.
To my mind when we write about any kind of fear and violence … we tend to propagate it … for if just by reading about it man acquires a thick skin to it … it becomes easy to actually do it in real life. We hold the might of the pen in our hands … we must always use it judiciously.
Hello Roda,
“…a man thing…” That’s interesting.
I also appreciate your sharing about cause and effect.
Peace, Eric
Hello Eric …. I am glad you took it well … what I meant that all of our reactions are sort of hardwired into our genes … from days when man was hunter / gatherer of the family food.
Its nice to have intellectual friends .. to sort of bounce ideas off by … I first began by writing on the Law of Attraction in “soul”words .. the type that connects our minds. It holds the power to heal. I am presently and amazingly .. even to myself begun the journey all over again … this time in verse. Most of my poems are over at http://www.rodalangrana.com. There’s only this one journey to spirituality .. the journey to wealth that adds health and happiness in as a bonus … but most people see it as complicated .. they do not understand the inner layers of meaning .. the outer layer is man .. the inner layer is God and the 2 sound the same but are different. It is a journey I would recommend to every one … the learning curve is at best 3 years … for receiving wealth in the millions.
great start, Eric and also best for me to start at the beginning… .. I shall continue my journey, much as I know Daniel is continuing his.. xx
Thank you Penny and all the very best as you embark on this journey of discovery. As you might collect much along the way, may I suggest you empty your travel bags. Bon voyage, Eric
Nice flow. Well developed scenes. I enjoyed this very much!
Thank you Joel,
For your visit and comment.
If you have the time, catch up with the series here > http://wp.me/P1YE83-10c I post once a week and you’ll be abreast in no time.
Cheers, Eric
Hi Eric, thanks very much for the like and visiting my blog. Your blog is amazing – so much work! I’m going to to keep reading. M
Thank you Miranda – for your visit and comment. I’ll be popping over to your blog too and let’s keep in touch. Cheers, Eric
Just wonderful.
Thank you Harbans for your visit and comment.
Happy New Year
Eric
Great story. Thanks for visiting Life’s Little Surprises. Blessings.
Thank you Emma for your return visit and this comment.
All good wishes, Eric
This I feel is ever so real, in fact I can as I read it feel the sincerity in every word. I am just wondering if this is your own personal experience.
Hello Kenneth,
Thank you for your return visit and comment.
Obviously, even in works of fiction, one cannot but help draw from personal experiences and observations.
Peace, Eric
hi eric – thanks for reading and following my words,
best, beth
You are very welcome Beth and thank you also for “subscribing” to my blog. Cheers, Eric
Eric I have no idea where to start!
First I am humbled by the fact you are visiting my meager words! Your talent is astonishing and I truly am honored your following me. I have quietly wrote for years in notebooks never sharing…long and short I lost all of my work due to a sailboat sinking. So I thought this to be the way to go as to never loose my writing again.
Never in a million years did I expect to find the world I have and then the encouragement from such talent. I have never studied writing nor did well in English in school. Writing came as a need to relieve stress.
I know you are very busy, but any input you are willing to give I will soak it up and do my best to apply. I hope to learn just from reading your work. Would love to learn from your advise if you have any.
Again, Thank you for the follow and all the likes so far.
Well Mitzir,
I wonder if I’m worthy of your profuse compliments but accept them with quite humility. Thank you.
You write well and I enjoy your pieces. For me, it does not matter whether or not you are lettered. Sailboat loss – wow! I think you came to the right place – a word released into cyberspace is a word everlasting.
Like you, I learn by reading accomplished authors and glean their skills and their errors – or yes, some make huge boo-boos but their repute allows them to get away with it. As a student myself, I’m hardly in a position to teach others – and I say this not with false humility. Believe me, I’m still learning to write as well as many others out there.
We’ll be seeing each other more in Blogsville, I’m sure.
Cheers, Eric
Well Eric that is food for thought. Thank you for your responce. Yes we will see each other out here. You have given me a great insight. And food for thought. Happy writing to you.
Peace be with you, Mitzi
Ah, so it is “Mitzi” – less the “r”. My apologies. Got it
Super awesome indeed.
Hello Harbans – liked your recent post and shall return.
Glad that you liked Fallen Grace and if you wish to join the growing number who are following this series, please go to this page > http://wp.me/P1YE83-10c
Cheers, Eric
My pleasure.
You’re welcome
Great job. Looking forward to the continuation.
Thank you for your visit and comment. If you’re keen there is no need to wait – please check out this page > http://wp.me/P1YE83-10c for the subsequent installments.
Great piece, Eric. Such a lovely read! I’m glad to have passed by. Thanks for visiting my site and liking a post. Really appreciate that.
Hello Josephine, your first comment here I see. Welcome, welcome
I’m a stamp collector and simply love the old Gold Coast stamps. All the best with your studies.
I’ve ticked to follow your blog and shall be reading more of your works.
All good wishes, Eric
Written words shouldn’t die. Two tips, place them in many places. Print copies of your best work to give to family and friends. Place your work on more than one site. Get published. Improve your skills, vocab and spelling.
Thank you for your visit and advices. Appreciate this.
Improving one’s skills is a lifelong journey and I’m still on the road.